Saturday, August 16, 2008

Caleb

Carla sat in front of the piano. She looked at the people in front of her, at a young man in particular. He smiled at her and she smiled back. Then her fine long fingers slipped over the piano keys and played a beautiful melody. Carla closed her eyes and sang in almost a whisper: "There's a man in this world who has never smiled. You may know his tragedy, in the later years, by heart. In the beginning there was a mother, father and a child - a troubled little silent boy, whose life they were to destroy. Known to us from this day on, like his father - Caleb."

The man closed his eyes. He remembered a conversation he had years ago with his mother. He barely understood what she spoke about back then, but now... it still wasn't everything, but understood a big part of it. Then he remembered his father. The only time he ever heard his father apologizing to someone... he remembered how his father turned his head every time something was wrong. He remembered the last words he heard from his father before he died - "And all this are words that are not meant to hurt you, but kill you, my stupid son!" Then he remembered how he smiled secretly while his father's body was lowered in the grave. His mother told him, in tears, that a person can make a difference sometimes.

Carla kept on playing the gentle melody while telling the story farther. "All his solutions, it seemed, were only problems in disguise... glueing on his drinking face and he got ready to erase another day."

"Remember, my son, at the end of every tunnel there's a little light." Those words, his mother shared with him in hope that everything would be fine one day. A few days later he heard her talking on the phone saying "He can fulfill his every dream... I’m happy as long as he’s not." Then he dreamed. He let himself spent one afternoon outside, on the bench in front of the house, dreaming how one day his mother would be dead.

"He went out, played with thunder and then stood under that apple tree where the snake let him feed on lost hopes..."

"Somehow... I lost one more way back home..." He remembered the day when he went in the lake with his boat. He imagined that in the middle there is a huge monster and started rowing towards it. Slowly, while his child's hands were barely holding the oars he thought that the monster was in fact hos mother. A beast, a sinner, right for so few things. He thought that just the past had made him blind to the way he turned the pain into a way of life.
He came back to here and now.

"He was a portrait of a man his mother drew to hate forever..."

He remembered that day when he understood it's all a charade and his mother wanted to keep it until the end. He could not take any more pain from the past and felt anger building up in him. Over the hills, under the sea, if needed, with will itself, with the whole Universe, He would fight. Everything around him sank in total darkness. All that was left were the pale outlines of the few people left to listen to Carla. He looked around the room and saw the sword on the wall.

A few quick steps and he was there, took it off the stand. He felt the cold metal in his hand and in minutes everyone were lying dead on the ground. He was covered in blood.
- When nothing moves, all's so still... - he faced the blood-covered white-lacquered piano and saw Carla. She froze in her place, her hands still on the keys. Her face was white, her glass eyes staring at his.
- Carla, darling... have I not told you never to sing this song?
He aimed a blow and stopped the sword inches away from her neck. She screamed and started crying.
- Why?

- ...dried up flowers are so beautiful. That applies for all things - living and dead. This necessary evil has no heart, Carla. His hand stroke. Blood splashed on the white and black keys and the wall behind.
- Because this is my story... I am Caleb.

"Flowers and people - he will now enlace. The price he must pay serving his whatevergod..."
She closed the piano and walked to him. Smiling. He took her hands and they got out of the room.
- The last words you sang were truly right. - he caught her by the neck and before she even realized what was happening, he was already strangling her. - Too bad you won't be able to pass them on.
She was looking scared at his eyes.
- Who... are.. you?
- I am Caleb. This is the price I must pay serving my whatevergod...

12.07.2007
Replica

10 comments:

Ryan said...

I REALLY love this one Sil, the only trouble i had was the organization of dialogue, it confused me sometimes. But the overall darkness and reasoning for darkness was enticing and wonderful.

Neeyla said...

I know it's confusing for others, but for me it make sense. I guess I'm too used to the song and made a story for it in my head. I can suggest you read the lyrics and then reread this.. maybe it would be clearer. ;)

Caleb
(by Tony Kakko)

His mother came up with such a clever way to save the day with a little white lie.
He thinks he missed the point back then, but now he's grown to understand it, in a way.

"Father said "I'm sorry" only once, as I remember"
"The words were not meant to hurt, only destroy you, my stupid son..."
One person can make a difference, sometimes...
Just turn his head when the kid is still and has a weak neck.

Smiled at his funeral, "happy you're dead."

All his solutions, it seemed, were only problems in disguise
Glueing on his drinkin´ face, got ready to erase another day...

Mother was yet confident, although they had it tight, taught her son
At the end of every tunnel’s a little light.
It wasn't a lie, it was her hope, that everything would be fine one day
"He can fulfill his every dream, I’m happy as long as he’s not."

"I hate it and fear can't face it
the child is not right, he's my greatest shame

Go out, create thunder, and stand right under
That old apple tree
Where dead snakes let him feed on those

Lost hopes, all those kind words could hurt him even more, now
Somehow, lost one more way back home

Out on the lake, he rows towards a monster he should’ve been running away from, years ago.
The past had made him blind to the way he’d turned the pain into a way of life.

Followed his father, tucked him in, Caleb knows the trade.
He’s the portrait of a man his mother drew to hate forever.
She was a beast, a deadly saint, wrong in many ways
Wanted to keep up the charade, until the end waltzing together

Over the hills, under the sea,
Fighting the will, whole Universe
Why does a man driving a hearse
Live in fear, Gift and a Curse

Taking ´em out, taking ´em all,
Shooting the wall, over and out
When nothing moves, all’s well,
A decision he can find a way to live with

...and dried up flowers are so beautiful.
And it applies to all things living, and dead.
For that I serve my time... in my suite in Hell.

"Now I ring the bell to tell the world,
I'm ready when they bring out the soon to be dead against the wall ..."
oo-oo-ooo
This necessary evil has no heart
ooo-oo-ooo
Flowers and people he will now enlace
A price he must pay serving a cold
...whatevergod.

Amin hosseini nasab said...

Ok its a bit cruel!!! i got confused where carla got killed!? the blood on the piano thing or when he strangled her?, but then maybe the blood thing didnt kill her ;D. another great piece

Neeyla said...

She got killed right before he said he was Caleb. :)

Amin hosseini nasab said...

she didnt know him???????

Neeyla said...

Nobody did.

You know how it goes in Hollywood movies - a guy that is legend, but no one knows how he looks like and even if he was sitting next to you, chances are you never recognize him. ;)

Amin hosseini nasab said...

hmmm well i got a different thing on the story XD :P

why did he say "havent i told you to never sing this story" if he didnt know her?

Neeyla said...

He knew her, she didn't know him. :P

Amin hosseini nasab said...

:P that doesnt make sense!!!!! if he had told that to her before, then she had to know him :P :P :P :P

Alev said...

Confusing? Kinda.. Cruel? Totally. xD But I love it Sil, it's beautiful. :) I love how you always manage to turn lyrics into stories. :D

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